This project was a complete failure but the design to the right should rectify this. There is a great scale change in the word “Watch,” yet it stays on the same base line; this creates a gradation and a progressive rhythm within the text, which could be even better if the W was smaller than the A. The large watch next to my silhouette really pops out and grabs your attention. The watch also balances the image as without it there would be a huge black gap. Another thing that grabs attention is the tiny “Me” in the C because it’s a small object inside a larger object. And all of these objects creates compositional movement jumping from the watch to my silhouette, to the words which seems to be a real attention grabber. This inconsistent flow creates a rhythm that has the viewer bounce around the composition. I might just redo this if I am ever given the chance.